Adrian: GOT IT! I don't have time for detailed comments at this point (check back with me next week, if you want), but in this version you figured out how to get the story to focus on exactly what you want us to conclude about you. Great going--and great story.
Adrian: GOT IT! I don't have time for detailed comments at this point (check back with me next week, if you want), but in this version you figured out how to get the story to focus on exactly what you want us to conclude about you. Great going--and great story.
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