Adrian: You have a compelling ethos (character) for this presentation, but you're not yet on track. You're not really using statistics to make your case. While you do mention one or two numbers in the opening of the presentation, you're not using numbers as the main way to convince us to help out--and this is what I'm asking you to work on for this assignment. The statistics should be more than incidental background; they should be essential to the case you're making.
Adrian: You have a compelling ethos (character) for this presentation, but you're not yet on track. You're not really using statistics to make your case. While you do mention one or two numbers in the opening of the presentation, you're not using numbers as the main way to convince us to help out--and this is what I'm asking you to work on for this assignment. The statistics should be more than incidental background; they should be essential to the case you're making.
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