Adrian: The speech itself is solid, but the slides don't really seem to fit with all that you're saying. For instance, while you're talking about the support HfH can give, your slides seem to focus on their efforts to build homes--not really what your point is, right? Seems like you needed more time to put this together and think through your slide choices.
Adrian: The speech itself is solid, but the slides don't really seem to fit with all that you're saying. For instance, while you're talking about the support HfH can give, your slides seem to focus on their efforts to build homes--not really what your point is, right? Seems like you needed more time to put this together and think through your slide choices.
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